Context The plot of my story is a girl, Amelia, is grieving her 'dead' sister so decides to go for a walk one night to clear her head about it, when she was on that walk she sees a figure in the distance and is convinced it is her sister Eden. she runs back home and tells her mum (Julie) what had happened. Julie tries to convince her that what she just saw was not Eden. The next day, Amelia goes downstairs and has a letter from someone, she opens it and it is from Eden telling her to meet her, Amelia is terrified. It cuts to a few hours later and Amelia is getting ready to go and see her sister, even though she still isn't fully sure of her existence. She leaves the house and goes to the alley where Eden said to go. After standing there for around ten mins, her sister shows up and tells her that Julie is dangerous and cannot be trusted, proceeding to tell her everything that their mum had done to her. Scared, they make a plan to ruin their mum. Amelia goes home and gets the...